Surabaya is my hometown, it is also a city where I grew up and got my schools. Surabaya is the capital city of East Java. In fact, Surabaya is only a small city than Jakarta for a capital city but it is as the center of commerce, education, health, etc. No wonder if it is always busy from dawn to night.
Surabaya is known as one of the hottest city in East Java. Nowadays, people often drive cars to their offices, malls,school and even universities. As the result smoke is always seen on teh roads. In addition, Surabaya also has many factories. They produces smokes everyday. These make Surabaya's condition worse. However, we can see different condition on Sundays. People try to find a way to be relax by riding a bike around Surabaya.
With the population of 2,2 million, Surabaya is considered a crowded city. As stated above, that is has many factories, so, it can be imagined how many people live in Surabaya. Every year the population is increasing due to the economic background of their lifes. If someone goes home to their hometown on Idul Fitri, he will invite his friends to earn a living in Surabaya.
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your paragraph is good, but in the last paragrap there is sentence "if someone goes home to their hometown on idul fitri,he will invite his friend to earn a living in surabaya" i think it's not necessery.
BalasHapusto : febrina
BalasHapusthx for your comment.
your paragraph is quite good.
BalasHapusbut there is a little mistake you made at the third paragraph, in second sentence
it should be:
it has many factories
no need to put 'is' in it
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Hi.. nadhiyah..
BalasHapusHmm.. I think your paragraph is quiet good,,
You describe galaxy mall more specific n detail..
be a good writer,,
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